*so I haven't posted in a very long time! sorry about that! but here's a poem I wrote while still in school (sucks to say that). I'll have some new one's coming soon :)
He stands on the roof and looks out.
Spread out before him is the landscape of his childhood.
He closes his eyes and lets the wind brush against his face as he remembers.
He lets the deception of good times bring him back to when he was a boy.
For years he has contemplated this moment,
yet feared it at the same time.
He knew the day would come when,
if pushed far enough,
the end would be too near.
Finally, that time has come.
The wind blows just strong enough
and
he falls. (or does he jump?)
He’s carried weightless, towards the cracked pavement down below.
With a melancholy smile plastered to his face
He has no idea that his bones will shatter,
like an old storm window,
when a child hits it with a stone.
Sunday, January 3, 2010
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keeks I could read yr poems forever. They're so well put together, do you start off writing the ending?
ReplyDeletethe last line is particularly powerful, and I think the last stanza is the strongest part of the piece. <3
ReplyDeletethanks so much! glad you liked it.
ReplyDeletethanks sam! and yes, i do tend to think about the ending before i write something. im not sure why i actually do this. in this case it worked.
ReplyDeleteWe thank you for the stone and children and for all the boys, days, and bones.
ReplyDeleteKiley, This is one my favorite things that I've read from you. I like that you allowed yourself to get abstract while keeping your oun style.
ReplyDeleteJiliian. You didn't write this. I am confused, Why are you saying thank you?
Great work KILEY. See you real soon!
-Pete
thanks pete! it's actually one from goldies poerty class
ReplyDeleteI'd give this piece a high five or buy it a beer.
ReplyDeletePossibly both.