I drove through bridges and tunnels,
alleyways and crowded streets
to meet You in a shady hotel
on the bad side of town;
an occurrence once repeated earlier
with two other girls.
Though this time was different.
I wasn’t lying when I said
“Because of You, I burn brightly”
and then You began to cry
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I thought since no one had updated in a while I'd put up a poem I really like.
Currently listening to:
1901 - Phoenix
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very touching piece. I love the structure and line breaks, and "because of You, I burn brightly." <3
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Dana! I'm glad you like it
ReplyDeleteBlisteringly adept. Two thumbs ridiculously in the air.
ReplyDeleteGood stuff, Sam.
ReplyDeleteEveryone fastens where there is gain.........................................
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